举例

Nowadays, learning a new language for the purpose of working in other countries seems to become more and more popular. Adults in need of money①or, why not, recognition are trying to pursue their happiness far away from home. Also, the hey days of employers looking not only for multi-skilled employees②, but they also want people who know more than their mother tongue③. Sooner or later, those who omitted learning more④ are prone to become jobless. （剑11 T3 考生大作文7分节选）

分析

本段中后置定语一共出现四次，如果按照我们平时语言输出方式，我们可能都写成了定语从句如 “Adults who are in need of money; employers who look not only for multi-skilled employees; people who know more than their mother tongue; those who omitted learning more”。但是，本段中考生在表达定语的时候用了三种语言表达方式，分别是介词短语（①），分词结构（②）以及定语从句（③, ④），有效的实现了表达的多样性和灵活性。因此，考官在语法项给出的评价是 “A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy. Grammar and punctuation are well controlled and error–free sentences are frequent”。